nice blocking! The sigh looks pretty good both in timing and spacing of the head. My humble suggestion would be to do a pass on the shoulders, also the pose when he first says "wisdom" looks a bit stiff, maybe break it down, add some lead and follow. Another thought, it seems to me that you can push the whole thing a bit further, you know? exaggerate poses and timing by maybe %20. Also, the arms/hand pose on "god" seems a bit symmetrical to me, i may be wrong though =)
nice blocking! The sigh looks pretty good both in timing and spacing of the head. My humble suggestion would be to do a pass on the shoulders, also the pose when he first says "wisdom" looks a bit stiff, maybe break it down, add some lead and follow. Another thought, it seems to me that you can push the whole thing a bit further, you know? exaggerate poses and timing by maybe %20. Also, the arms/hand pose on "god" seems a bit symmetrical to me, i may be wrong though =)
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